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Superstar

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RE: poem ANTICIPATION Not related to Nic


Great example....and hey.....don't sell yourself short.  Just think about it and toss some words together......

I'll try to come up with something in a bit......  :)

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Senorita Vixen

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The latter is a huge thing to ask... as for the first, YOU´re the expert, lol! I had no clue what a haiku was until I read the ones that some members were posting at the TONCAS site some years ago...

Appartently, it´s a Japanese poetry mode consisting of a pattern of 5/7/5 syllables. Most haikus talk about moods that go with the seasons, according to the Japanese tradition. But haikus are very popular in other countries and languages and can be about EVERYTHING YOU LIKE.

An example I found in the Wikipedia:

Whitecaps on the bay:
A broken signboard banging
In the April wind.
--Richard Wright


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Hey Mara!

Why don't you explain to everyone what a Haiku is and then post one of your own....

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Senorita Vixen

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Glad to see you keep up with the "tradition" and post poems here too! I foresee a Haiku thread is not long in coming!

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Alot of the poems I used to post were other types of poems....not poems about Nic.  This was one of em'


ANTICIPATION

My love for you
Has not turned cold
It's full of heat
Yet put on hold

For you, my love
Have turned from me
And I sit and I wait
And I try to believe
That one day soon
you'll return to me

My days are long
My life stands still
And my heart can't find
It's own freewill

So, once more
On this new day
I'll sit and I'll wait
And I'll wonder and pray
That one day soon
You'll again
Journey my way



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